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Poetry

The Poet’s Vow

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1. The Poet’s Vow

----O be wiser thou,
Instructed that true knowledge leads to love.
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Wordsworth - a

1.1. Part the First:Showing Wherefore the Vow Was Made

X
He did not vow in fear, or wrath,
Or grief’s fantastic whim,—
But, weights and shows of sensual things
Too closely crossing him,
On his soul’s eyelid the pressure slid
And made its vision dim.
XI
And darkening in the dark he strove
’Twixt earth and sea and sky,
To lose in shadow, wave, and cloud,
His brother’s haunting cry.
The winds were welcome as they swept,
God’s five-day work66 he would accept,
But let the rest go by67.
XII
He cried—“O touching, patient Earth,
That weepest in thy glee,
Whom God created very good,
And very mournful, we!
Thy voice of moan doth reach His throne,
As Abel’s rose from thee73.
XIII
“Poor crystal sky, with stars astray!
Mad winds, that howling go
From east to west! perplexèd seas,
That stagger from their blow77!
O motion wild! O wave defiled!
Our curse hath made you so.
XIV
“We! and our curse! do I partake
The desiccating sin?
Have I the apple at my lips?
The money-lust within?
Do I human stand with the wounding hand,
To the blasting heart akin?

2. Note on the text

First published under the initials ‘E.B.B.’ in the October 1836 issue of the New Monthly Magazine , “The Poet’s Vow,” like EBB’s other ballads of the 1830s and ‘40s, reflects the ways in which she adapted this traditional genre to modern subject matter (see the “Introduction” to Elizabeth Barrett Browning: An Annotated Selected Critical Edition , Broadview Press). The poem addresses the dialectic of solitude and society, withdrawal and engagement, a theme that pervades Romantic poetry by Wordsworth, Coleridge, Shelley, and Keats, as well as Tennyson’s early poems. In these preoccupations, “The Poet’s Vow” is linked thematically to the first of EBB’s popular ballads, “The Romaunt of Margret,” published just three months earlier in the New Monthly Magazine . Together, the poems teach “two truths,” as a reviewer noted in 1838: “first, that the creature cannot be isolated from the creature, and second, that the creature cannot be sustained by the creature” (BC 4:400). The epigraph, added in 1838, underscores the poem’s critique of Romantic ideologies of the solitary poet communing with a silenced, feminized Nature, and reflects the intensive engagement with Wordsworth’s poetry prompted by EBB’s first meeting with him at a literary dinner in London on 28 May 1836, and her subsequent journey in Wordsworth’s and Mary Russell Mitford’s company to Duke of Devonshire’s gardens at Chiswick (BC 3:174n, 205, 217). The subtitles for the poem’s sections were also added in 1838.

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3. Explanatory Notes

Notes
a.
Wordsworth No text.

66.
workalludes to God’s creation of the world in seven days, human beings on the sixth (Genesis 1).

67.
byThis stanza differs substantially in earliest versions. 1838 reads as follows (1836 is almost identical): He held his soul above his clay ‘Twixt earth and sea and sky, T’imbue with shade and wave and cloud Its immortality— But the mortal things fell from its wings And left them hot and dry. Then follow two stanzas not in 1850 and 1856: He bathed it in the sea of thought, Unsensual, rolling aye— Where God’s unwaning countenance O’erhung a moonlight sway— But the tide was dark with the serpent’s mark, And God’s was turned away. He looked on all things beautiful, The shadow o’er them lying— Gave ear to all things musical, Whose loudest note is sighing— He shook to the tone of creation’s groan, And the voice of Death replying.

73.
thee In Genesis 4.10, God hears Abel’s blood crying from the ground after he is murdered by his brother Cain.

77.
blow alluding to Genesis 3, describing the effects of God’s “curse” (see l. 79) on Nature after the fall of Eve and Adam. Ll. 74-77 differ substantially in 1836, 1838.



Elizabeth Barrett Browning. Date: 18-Feb-2009
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